NaBloWriMo[SubmissiveGuyComics also did a post on ‘home’ for our NaBloWriMo project]


“When are you coming home?” she asked.

The question that used to be a sweetness between them hung in the air for a second before it dissipated into the empty room. She followed it with an ugly laugh that was much too loud.

She took another drink.

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  1. I actually love that I feel like I have to put a disclaimer here so you lovely readers don’t think I’m despondent and then send me sympathy and love notes.

    It’s a fiction piece: Today’s NaNo topic was ‘home’ and this is what I came up with.

    I’m not drinking and being melancholy: I’m sober and making a fish burger… *smile*.


  2. I am soo glad that you did put the disclaimer here, smile.

    Good writing, it certainly evoked a nice melancholy, sad emotion in me.

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