I know most of you probably didn’t notice that I still had one more request to fulfil from my ‘Dommes don’t speak, they rawwwr’ post way back in June.
I was asked for a snippet from my NaNo writing from last year. A cheeky request! I recorded this soon after the request, then stalled on posting it because I wanted to find a snippet I liked better. Then trawling through 50k words to find something I liked better seemed like too much work. So I stalled some more.
But here it is, a piece that describes the shoes shown in the picture. I used descriptions of my shoes at the beginning of chapters: it helped me to get into the mood for writing, and the idea of describing the shoes that were relevant to each plot point provided a common thread for me to weave through the story. Also, shoes!!!
Requested by the very patient:
A wonderful word picture, painted in your sublime, non accented voice. I listened to it a couple of times and you more than did justice to the picture… and I am still swooning over your use of the word “gravitas”.
*smile* Thanks so much, I appreciate all swooning!
I LOVE THESE SHOES!!! The descriptive is quite nice also… yes yes. I’m sure the intended will be happy.
Mostly I love the shoes!
*laugh* I know, aren’t they awesome!!!?!! Squeeee!!
“… and like some dirty hot curling tongue… encircling the sweet soft spot that makes her squirm when licked.”
Ohhh I could listen to that again and again while my mind melts.
Thank you thank you thank you!! I think we’d all agree that more readings from your Nano writing would be greatly appreciated!
*big smile* It was my absolute pleasure.
I’m so glad you liked it, and thank you for the challenging request!
I just love your deep sexy voice, which, allied to those gorgeous shoes, and the way you put it over, makes this submissive wish he knew you.
*smile* Thank you wills31, I appreciate the love!
“Like” is far from enough! That’s such intelligent beautiful writing, and delivered perfectly.
Thank you so much for coming back here and leaving your sweet footprint *smile*.